I wrote this for my boyfriend..is it any good?

It reads like you are trying to make him over or have him become someone, something more in line with your visions of life. It's full, maybe too full, of serious and worthwhile aspirations, but rather tered and random, with too much repetition of certain phrases. It does serve to communicate to him where your heart and mind are and, perhaps, prepare him for some of what might come from you. But there is no mention of what is joyful and fulfilling about your relationship -- foundation for future growth and exploration. Peace.